> Ah. I very much liked this. It's been a while since I last commented on stories here ^_^ Short, but poetic, symbolic, and somehow just that tiny bit sad. The Sakura's POV was very well done, and the opening sentence was excellent. It grabbed my attention right away, and I must say, you've found a very delicate balance between writing length and style. The style you used in this was very surreal, but if you had taken it any longer, it would've certainly become boring. But in this short few paragraphs, you created a fleeting feel to it, almost like a stray thought on a dark night, and that made me smile and feel just that small sense of melancholy. Omedettou. ^_^ First time I've seen your name...new-comer? @@ If so, hajimemashite, and welcome. ^___^ *wave*
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> Love,
> Kage Tsuki
