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Posted by GrayMM at 02:51:58 08/03/2004.
Well done. I particularly enjoyed Subaru's dismissal of the oddity of the situation and Seishirou's perfect understanding of how the boy's mind works. It works well as a conclusion, which are generally hard to write. It also captures the delicious-hint-of-danger feel in the conclusions of Tokyo Babylon's chapters. They introduce a little tension while simultaneously resolving the action.
I liked the way this one was written - excellent job, for the whole fic.
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