A very satisfying end to a thoroughly satisfying fic. Nice light, unlaboured writing gave me the sunny, airy feeling that I usually associate with TB, which is major points in my book.

And, despite this being 6 chapters I didn't have to struggle through any of it. A great fic for a single sitting. Dunno what I can say to criticize, other than possibly a little more description would have been nice.

Kudos. n.n

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