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Posted by Skuld at 06:08:10 26/12/2003.
> Finally, someone blaming me for something this good ;). Always there to be evil, anytime you should need it.
You frighten me, darling, you really do. ^_^
> I also love the last line... although, I think there's something slightly off with it. Something that breaks the flow. Reread it, and tell me if you can't see what I'm talking about.
I can definitely see what you're talking about, now that I'm rereading it. It's because I have such a huge break between Seishirou's lines of speech there, but I couldn't really find a way to shorten it, because I really wanted all of those things to be said. Aaah, always the writer's dilemma, that is. ._.
It's not one of my best endings, have to admit. o_O;; I dunno, I think "Only I" is probably still my favorite of my "Skuld on crack" fics. ¬_¬ And the best part was, I was ambushed by the bunnies for it in the shower. Those bunnies have no sense of modesty. -_-;;
Promise me, Ari, that you'll never ambush me in the shower. ^_~
~Skuld-chan
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