> Very nicely done. I couldn't find a thing wrong with ti, aside from the lack of 'Subaru-kun' when Seishirou referred to the Sumeragi.
Here's what I posted in response to Shi's comments:
There's a reason I declined to include the "-kun" suffix in reference to Subaru. I believe that Seishirou uses "-kun" to Subaru as sort of a tease to the Sumeragi, since the "-kun" implies that on a certain level, they are comrades of some sort. No doubt it's very painful to Subaru to hear that, and Seishirou, even when binding Subaru to him does not feel that comraderie. That's why I did not include the "-kun" in reference to Subaru. ^_^
Hope that clears it up. The omission was purposeful. ^_^
