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Posted by Xandra at 04:47:13 28/05/2003.
> Oh you two are absolutely EVIL!!! I must admit that this idea is wonderfully original and funny. Sort of a TB version of 'Wish^_^ I couldn't stop laughing at a lot of the scenes. Seishirou as a fallen angel is such a precious evil chararacter, and Subaru doesn't know how deep he's in yet *cackles*
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Thank you, thank you. We enjoy being evil immensely! Especially if it involves Seishirou and Subaru in interesting positions.
> Still, maybe a few background information would be good. Such as how long angels usually live so we can tell if they're old or young, maybe the various jobs they occupy like warriors or messengers. You might consider showing us why being an angel isn't all it's meant to be as Lucifer so eloquently puts it in 'Paradise Lost'. Add to that I think some words should be capitalized like: Heaven, God, Angel, Fallen, Arch Angel. After all, to Subaru and Seishirou they don't hold the same meanings as they do to humans.
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Well, this being more light hearted fluff, we didn't want to dwell too much on the aspects of this universe, save only to keep it as much in the spirit of Clamp as possible. As for the pesky caps, meep! I tried my best. I think anyone who knows me knows I absolutely hate editing, cos even after pounding on fic for ages, I know I still miss stuff. Sighs.
> All in all, this is the fic that's dragged me back to reading S&S/TB/X fanfics after a hiatus of 4-5 months. I'm looking forward to more from you two so get working^_~
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Waaah! Yes yes, *scurries off to edit more*. Glad that you're dragged back into the S/S fanfic-dom. Xan though has many stories cooking and next on the cards is Paradigm Shift 8 together with a heavy duty lemon that I'm been cooking with MidorinoMizu.
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