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Posted by TamChronin at 02:17:20 20/05/2003.
~grins~ Lemon to come, huh?
Well, there were enticing hints of problems to come in this chapter, and I suppose a lemon in this chapter *would* have been a tad bit premature.
Dang it.
Okay, all greed aside, this was a good chapter. I can't wait to read more! The fight was a little skimped on, you could have got into a tad bit more detail and I'd have been happy, but all in all I'd call it a success.
Keep going you two! Awesome story!
~Tam
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