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Re: Re: Paradigm Shift (TB/X AU) Chapter 5/20?

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Posted by Aishuu at 19:27:09 22/12/2002.

> As usual, my late feedback. I swear I just read this now! ^^;


Better late than never!! And FBBBB!!! We were a bit bummed that no one replied this time around... but people were just slow.
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> *coughs* ANyway, fantastic work on part 5. I know you guys took a break (I'm sure you needed it), but this was pretty much worth it, I think.

It was called "Aishuu got overloaded". Aishuu tends to overwork, and Xannee smacks her for it!!!


Yuuto's parts were good (kind of hard to write a person with such a fluid personality),


YEs, but he's cute. We forgive him muchly!

and Kanoe... what the hell is she /doing/?! Is she trying to get her own side killed?! That's Hinoto's job!! *steaming*
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LOL.... well, she kinda didn't KNOW who Subaru was. Remember Hinato's early visions? Just Kamui's face is revealed... at this point, none of the Seals are PICTURED...

> ...*coughs again* Ahem. Anyway, Subaru is feeling guilty as usual *feels the urge to hug him*, so all is well.

Subaru guilt trips like nothing else!


Seishirou... ... ... in the last scene... ... Aaagh, I've been watching too much Chobits! No, it's going to my head... -_-;; And I thought I was immune to that sort of thing too... *sniff*
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Seishirou's personality is scary. He's the TB Seishirou we see, keeping to his vow to do his best for Subaru for one year while still trying to win the bet.

> And Satsuki? Get a life. I would think someone as bored as her would simply not be interested in human matters...
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She's only interested when something interesting HAPPENS... and you have to admit Sei's game with Subaru is fascinating!

> And although Hokuto isn't there, silver on white to go with the jacket is kewl. ^_^ My compliments.
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*Shimmers* Thanks! I think it's my favorite outfit so far, though chapter seven has another one with a wild and whacked out twist!

> Wai!
> Kamitra
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> P.S. .... .... .... Did I really write that? >_o

KAWAIIIII.... yes.

~ Aishuu


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