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Re: Paradigm Shift (TB/X AU) Chapter 5/20?

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Posted by Kamitra at 08:54:10 22/12/2002.

As usual, my late feedback. I swear I just read this now! ^^;

*coughs* ANyway, fantastic work on part 5. I know you guys took a break (I'm sure you needed it), but this was pretty much worth it, I think. Yuuto's parts were good (kind of hard to write a person with such a fluid personality), and Kanoe... what the hell is she /doing/?! Is she trying to get her own side killed?! That's Hinoto's job!! *steaming*

...*coughs again* Ahem. Anyway, Subaru is feeling guilty as usual *feels the urge to hug him*, so all is well. Seishirou... ... ... in the last scene... ... Aaagh, I've been watching too much Chobits! No, it's going to my head... -_-;; And I thought I was immune to that sort of thing too... *sniff*

And Satsuki? Get a life. I would think someone as bored as her would simply not be interested in human matters...

And although Hokuto isn't there, silver on white to go with the jacket is kewl. ^_^ My compliments.

Wai!
Kamitra

P.S. .... .... .... Did I really write that? >_o


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