Wah! So sweet! It's rare you get something from Hokuto's point of view, usually, it's Subaru who gets to tell the story. You've really drawn attention to how much she really loved her brother... not that her little spell helped at all, but that's another story. ^^

I do hope you've got s'more stashed somewhere because this little one-shot was quite good. It's hard to find nice, well-done fics that don't require a huge investment of time to read.

-Krys

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