That was such a touching part. I really felt for Subaru in this, and you portrayed his shyness in every respect quite nicely. Seishirou, while being an absolute bastard, was really nice in this... even for a little while... *tears well up* I really am gonna cry! *starts crying*
......My sinuses are acting up, and I just went through a mental trip before this, so this was good medicine for my troubles. ^_^;; Maybe that's why I feel for Subaru in this part particularly so, because for me, talking to people is an /optional/ kind of thing. I'm terribly and naturally shy.