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Posted by Aishuu at 22:26:19 02/09/2002.

> Wow... I went into this not quite knowing what to expect, but I ended up really liking it.

Thank you!

I don't read much FruBa fanfiction as a general rule (there's too much room for it to just plain suck, if you ask me)

And if you ask me, 9/10 of it does... but I keep reading it, because I occassionally come across gems.

but this was very nice.

Thank you.

I always thought that they should have said more about the New Year's Ceremony in the anime... out of curiosity, did you get the information about each of the Jyunishi playing in turn from the manga, or did you make it up?
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Artistic license. Pretty much ALL of it is made up, except for Yuki's costume and the fact that he danced.

> Other bits... loved the bit with Akito being sick in style. *snrks*

If he has to be sick, leave it to Akito to do it the best possible way. Why ELSE does he where all those elegant kimonos and have Hatori waiting on him?

And the parts with Yuki's parents... they never show up in the anime.

Or the manga. I had to ask about them, and it's basically believed that they only see Yuki as a "thing" or "tool."

I can't picture Shigure singing, though.

That comes from my obsession with his seiyuu.
And I can... Shigure has a deep soul... especially in the manga. Shigure is just FREAKY in the later manga.
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> Also love Haru/Yuki, but that's just me.

Was just hints... about why Haru's obsession grow... because Yuki is like Arima from Kare Kano. He's perfect without knowing it.

So I loved the bits you gave them. Actually I love Haru in general. And his outfit in this fic. So, yeah, I'd be interested in seeing what other FruBa you've done.

I've only done one other so far- and it's a Haru spoof... ^_~ I'll post it after this one's been up for a little... don't want to flood the board.
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> Only one complaint -- no spoiler warning!

I SOOO forgot. I'm so not used to posting spoiler warnings...

That bit about Kyou and the monster within him is a rather big one ^_~

Did I mention that? Well, the thing is, this fic was originally called Liberi Fatali.... but it took a weird turn, so I split it. Liberi Fatali is actually still in process... it's about Yuki's relationship with Akito and Kyou. And freaky...

I only saw the end of the series a couple weeks ago, and I would've been pretty put out if I'd read this first. So, just something to keep in mind.

Sorry. I'll try to keep an eye out for it.

~ Aishuu


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