*cries* you two are so mean!! *calms down* ok where do i start?
first things first: great lemon. we finally got one! *jumps for joy* not only was it in the usual yummy KnK lemony style, but there was some nice humor interjected as well, which i found very cute.
and now on to the bad part: poor sei-kun!! i never did, but how many ppl here mentioned the fact that muraki was not around for what seemed like ages, and that meant that he was planning something eeeeevil with his twisted brain? and he DID!! omg!!
the only exceptionally cool thing about that was that we got to see subaru confromt meiri!! YES!! and he did a good job of keeping his cool, and helping sei from blowing a gasket as well. go subby! oh and there is always tree-san ^o^, who, IMHO, can and is NEVER written badly by you guys XD.
*sits and keeps hitting refresh waiting for 30 to appear... then sobs b/c she realizes that there is only 10 chapters left*